托福寫作審題方法:通過思路串聯(lián)題目
2020-10-30
托福寫作審題方法:通過思路串聯(lián)題目!托福寫作的題目看似五花八門,話題眾多,其實(shí)眾多題目之間總會(huì)有一些聯(lián)系,包括題目?jī)?nèi)容的聯(lián)系和思路的聯(lián)系。如果你去孤立地分析每個(gè)題目,事倍功半;相反,審題的時(shí)候思考題目之間的關(guān)系,則事半功倍。
2018年8月26日真題
Imagine you need to improve your performance in order to get better grades or higher work payment, which of the following ways would you choose?
A. Do more extra work or assignments that are not required
B. Participate more actively or contributing your own ideas more frequently in the group discussion
如果我們選擇B,該如何展開思路呢?我們都知道,工作和學(xué)習(xí)中遇到問題是在所難免的,尤其是那種自己難以解決的問題。小組討論的時(shí)候,大家可以討論與工作、學(xué)習(xí)相關(guān)的許多內(nèi)容,其中,就包括工作中和學(xué)習(xí)中遇到的問題,把問題提出來,請(qǐng)求大家?guī)臀页鲋饕狻⑾朕k法,就能夠解決問題,最終,就會(huì)使一個(gè)人的工作表現(xiàn)和學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)提高。這樣一來,小組討論相對(duì)于選項(xiàng)A,即超額完成任務(wù)的優(yōu)勢(shì)就凸顯出來,做再多的練習(xí)題,或者拼命地加班,問題解決不了,進(jìn)步也就成為水中月。接著,我們就可以梳理出一條段落展開的思路:
小組討論→尋求幫助→解決問題→提高成績(jī)
按照這個(gè)思路,我們就能寫出一個(gè)層次的說理部分:
To begin with, a group discussion is a valuable opportunity for a person to solve his problems. As is known to all, during the course of doing a job, it is inevitable to encounter the problems that cannot be addressed with one’s own power. Would he be expected to have nothing to do when facing a challenging question? Absolutely not. A worker’s performance does not depend so much on the energy he puts in his work, as on the efficiency to solve his problems. Under such a situation, a group discussion is an excellent place to looking for answers.
“通過解決問題來提高成績(jī)”,就是一條使用率非常高的破題思路,利用它可以破解許多題目。我們?cè)倏匆坏李}:
2017年2月26日真題
Agree or disagree: Rather than helping children with their schoolwork, parents should encourage their children to do their work independently.
針對(duì)這道題,許多同學(xué)的觀點(diǎn)是Agree,即獨(dú)立完成作業(yè)是特別有助于孩子的成長(zhǎng)。但是,家長(zhǎng)的幫助對(duì)于孩子也很重要,因?yàn)樽鲎鳂I(yè)的時(shí)候,總會(huì)遇見那種自己不會(huì)做的題,這個(gè)時(shí)候只能面對(duì)難題無動(dòng)于衷嗎?當(dāng)然不是。家長(zhǎng)的幫助可以使自己有效地解決難題,而且還能學(xué)會(huì)方法,這對(duì)以后的學(xué)習(xí)大有幫助。剛才寫的那段話就可以移植到這個(gè)題里面。只需要進(jìn)行一些詞匯的改變:
To begin with, parents’ assistance is very necessary for a kid to solve some challenging problems. As is known to all, during the course of doing homework, it is inevitable to encounter the problems that cannot be addressed with one’s own power. Would he be expected to have nothing to do when facing a challenging question? Absolutely not. A student’s academic performance does not depend so much on the energy he puts in his assignments, as on the efficiency to solve his problems. Under such a situation, his mother’s help is very crucial for him to improve his grades.
再來思考一道題:
2018年1月27日;2017年3月25日真題:
Which one do you think is the most important factor in helping students study in college or university?
A. Tutors who can provide individual instructions for students who have difficulty in study
B. The encouragement from family and friends
C. High quality education in high school
如果我們選擇A,就可以用這條思路進(jìn)行展開,而且選項(xiàng)A里的students who have difficulty in study,也會(huì)提示我們解決問題是提高學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)重要途徑。我們只需要把前面題目中的group discussion換成tutors,而且一位私人教師是對(duì)于同學(xué)們解決問題幫助更大,因?yàn)樗梢蕴岢龈哚槍?duì)性的解決辦法,同時(shí)選項(xiàng)B的缺陷也會(huì)通過對(duì)比而顯現(xiàn),家人和朋友的鼓勵(lì)至多是一種精神動(dòng)力,并不能對(duì)癥下藥;選項(xiàng)C中,中學(xué)時(shí)候的成績(jī)?cè)賰?yōu)秀,和大學(xué)教育也會(huì)有鴻溝。比如,大學(xué)里,有的同學(xué)寫專業(yè)論文的時(shí)候出現(xiàn)問題了,中學(xué)里學(xué)的基本概念就起不到作用了。還是有一位關(guān)系密切的教師更有效,他能夠提出專業(yè)的、有效的指導(dǎo)。
例題繼續(xù):
2019年5月24日真題
There are two kinds of classes in the school: small class with fewer students (professors may remember all students’ names); and big class with more students. Which one do you prefer?
通過之前的分析,小班課的優(yōu)勢(shì)應(yīng)該一目了然,它的作用就相當(dāng)于一位私人教師,也相當(dāng)于小組討論,可以地,針對(duì)性地幫助學(xué)生解決問題。
在準(zhǔn)備托福寫作的過程中,考生們面臨的一大難題就是沒有思路,面對(duì)一道題目不知道說什么。老師們通常會(huì)啟發(fā)大家,關(guān)注調(diào)動(dòng)生活里的點(diǎn)點(diǎn)滴滴,創(chuàng)作是來源于生活的。除此之外,對(duì)于題目的分析和串聯(lián)也是一項(xiàng)重要工作,題目的聯(lián)系可以是縱向的,即相同話題的題目之間可以聯(lián)系,比如教育類的題目里,就可以用一些思路串聯(lián)起來;也可以是橫向的,即屬于不同話題的題目也可以串聯(lián),比如教育類和家庭類,家庭類的題目有那種討論父母教育的題目,父母教育和老師的教育會(huì)有區(qū)別嗎?你可能會(huì)說,當(dāng)然有區(qū)別啊,我的作業(yè)題我媽媽都看不懂。然而,在我們寫托福作文的時(shí)候,這種區(qū)別是可以忽略不計(jì)的。你可以說我的媽媽就是一位大學(xué)老師,對(duì)我的學(xué)習(xí)幫助很大。托福寫作是一種自由度比較高的寫作,即在緊扣題目,言之成理的范圍內(nèi)大家可以自由地發(fā)揮。考官們出題的意圖就是想看看考生們能不能用英文講出一番道理來,至于故事的真實(shí)性他們不是很在意。
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